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      The Artist | | Comment rating: 0
      Started sketching about a year ago looking for feedback
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          Rhiea | | Comment rating: 0
          A lot of this looks really good! His face looks mostly right, but the shape of the nose looks a little weird because of how the top line gets kind of flat. The lips also look off because of how thick the lines are and because they have no shading, the only other things that have lines that harsh in this drawing are there to convey shadow, so if the lips are bright and don't have a bunch of shadow, then think about giving them softer lines.
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            Rhiea | | Comment rating: 0
            A lot of this looks really good! His face looks mostly right, but the shape of the nose looks a little weird because of how the top line gets kind of flat. The lips also look off because of how thick the lines are and because they have no shading, the only other things that have lines that harsh in this drawing are there to convey shadow, so if the lips are bright and don't have a bunch of shadow, then think about giving them softer lines. The hair has the right shape and looks pretty good but I can see places where you've overlapped lines on the hair and it would look better if you used more long fluid strokes to create the shape because you won't get dark patches that aren't really meant to me there, and the longer strokes will make it look more like real hair anyway. I really like his beard and eyes and I think you've got a really good set of base skills so far! Keep up the good work!~
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              Rhiea | | Comment rating: 0
              A lot of this looks really good! His face looks mostly right, but the shape of the nose looks a little weird because of how the top line gets kind of flat. The lips also look off because of how thick the lines are and because they have no shading, the only other things that have lines that harsh in this drawing are there to convey shadow, so if the lips are bright and don't have a bunch of shadow, then think about giving them softer lines. The hair has the right shape and looks pretty good but I can see places where you've overlapped lines on the hair and it would look better if you used more long fluid strokes to create the shape because you won't get dark patches that aren't really meant to me there, and the longer strokes will make it look more like real hair anyway. I really like his beard and eyes and I think you've got a really good set of base skills so far! Keep up the good work!~
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                Rhiea | | Comment rating: 0
                A lot of this looks really good! His face looks mostly right, but the shape of the nose looks a little weird because of how the top line gets kind of flat. The lips also look off because of how thick the lines are and because they have no shading, the only other things that have lines that harsh in this drawing are there to convey shadow, so if the lips are bright and don't have a bunch of shadow, then think about giving them softer lines.
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